Get Sparkling Copy that Converts
Could you use another pair of eyes on your copywriting before you publish, print, or postage?
The right words can be the difference between a lightning bolt and a lightning bug. Get expert feedback on your website, emails, and sales pages using my proprietary Fanfare Messaging Formula™ that’s based on the 13 psychological triggers that drive human behavior.
That’s Where I Come In
I get it. You need to do a better job with your messaging, but you don’t know the best way to polish your pitch. And there may be a little voice nagging you to gut-check your drafts because you aren’t sure if you’ve hit pay dirt. Am I right?
Why fumble your way through writing only to have your message fall flat when you can hand it over to a pro and feel champion confident?
If you need help with any of these, I’ve got you covered:
What You Get
A Champion Copy Critique includes an objective review of your content, and you’ll get a written summary that examines your copy in detail.
I’ll tell you what’s working well, what’s not working so well, and what should be revised. Plus, I’ll review your messaging strategy, copy, positioning, offer, and give you persuasion points. If you want deeper support, check out my Magical Messaging Makeover, request a copywriting quote, or schedule a discovery call.
People hire me to critique copy in 4 specific areas:
Hone the Message
Zero in on whether your copy is speaking to the intended target audience and addressing their pain points.
Clarity
See if what you’re offering is clear, confusing, or uses industry jargon.
Infuse Psychology & Persuasion
Determine ways to make your argument or position stronger.
Proofread
Check for grammar errors and spelling faux pas.
Results You Can Expect
You can rest assured that your Champion Copy Critique will be custom-tailored, and make sure your copy:
4 Reasons To Get A Champion Copy Critique
In all my years of writing and editing copy (15+ but who’s counting) for clients, there’s 4 primary reasons you request help:
No time: You’re busy running a business or trying to change the world, and spending time on picking the right words, hook, or headline has NO appeal to you.
Too close to your product or service: When you’re passionate about a product or service, you can lose objectivity. And it’s not your fault. There’s a phrase my dad used to say: “Make sure you keep things in perspective and always see the forest from the trees.” I’ll take a step back to make sure we don’t miss any glaring gaps, omissions, or unnecessary fluff in your copy.
No experience or interest: Listen, I’ll be the first to admit, copywriting is NOT for everyone. Just like you may have no interest in analyzing seashell patterns, you might also have ZERO interest in writing copy.
A second opinion: You want a professional, objective opinion.
Your Special Bonus for Booking!
You’ll get a completely free messaging guide, just for booking your Champion Copy Critique.
This messaging guide will help you:
So, Who the Heck Am I and Why Should You Care?
Hi, I’m Angela, but my friends call me Ang.
Here’s what I can do for YOU.
I’ve worked with over 100 businesses in the past 15+ years on their copywriting, messaging, and marketing strategy, so I genuinely understand how your messaging boosts revenue. If you want practical know-how that’s helped drive millions in sales working with owners and leaders, I’m your gal.
You’ve got choices, so remember these two things about me:
- 10X the Industry Chops: When it comes to industry experience, you’re in good hands. I’ve been the mastermind behind the messaging in no fewer than 10 industries: coaching, real estate, financial services, not-for-profit, retail, education, toys, software, manufacturing, skin care and beauty, and health and nutritional supplements.
- Training: I walk my talk. How can I ask you to let me coach you if I don’t receive coaching myself? I invest thousands and thousands of dollars into learning from top marketing, copywriting, and online business leaders so I can pass the knowledge over to you.
Truth Bomb
I don’t know how long I’ll be offering these Champion Copy Critiques until they’re waitlisted. If you want some major messaging help that packs a persuasive punch, book now.
Watch A Real-time 9-Minute Website Critique, So You Get A Taste
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Praise
I WASN’T EXPECTING TO BE ABLE TO USE HER FEEDBACK TO LEARN AND GROW
“Angela helped me realize where I may accidentally have been turning potential buyers off, when I actually thought I was wording things the “way I was supposed to”. Her live feedback and her changes helped me understand concepts that I could immediately use on other parts of my website and emails as well. All I was expecting was to get some better copy, which I absolutely received. But what I wasn’t expecting was to be able to use her feedback to learn and grow and be applicable even in conversations with potential clients!”
MY WEB COPY READS SO MUCH BETTER
“Your copy review was just the bomb. My web copy reads so much better. I had been struggling with this for ages and you cut through the fluff and got straight to the point. It sounds super professional now, without any business BS and still – it sounds like me! I’ve been complimented already how well it reads – and how compelling it makes my membership offer!”
HER AD COPY HAS CONSISTENTLY LED TO GOOD CONVERSION RATES
“Working with Angela has been such a positive experience. Her punctuality and reliability in meeting deadlines have made it very easy to work with her. What I particularly appreciate is her commitment to understanding our clients. Angela takes the time to research and truly grasp each brand’s voice, which is evident in the quality and authenticity of her copy. Her ad copy has consistently led to good conversion rates for our clients and I’m looking forward to continuing our collaboration on future projects.”
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